1、最近几年作文都是已写信为主,今年有可能也是写信,不管是不是,同学们都有必要看看最近几年的作文参考范文。一方面可以掌握书信的写作格式,实在不懂写内容,但是开头的称呼Dear ~~( Tom ,Li Ming),结尾的落款Yours~ ( Tom ,Li Ming)这些基本格式总要写上去,写作格式正确也会得几分,记着我们的目标是能得一分是一分。另一方面看看范文可以找点感觉,不是要背句子,而是看看作文的写作思路。请记住以下三个写信常用的句子:I’ve got good news for you. 我有好消息要告诉你。(一般用在开头第一句)You are welcome to visit my home / Guilin anytime. 欢迎随时来我家/ 来桂林玩。(一般用于文末)If you can join us ,piease give me a reply soon.如果你参加,请尽快回复我。I’m looking forward to your reply.期待你的回复。(一般用于文末)
2、因为是流水作业改试卷,改卷老师从来没有也不会看过阅读理解里面的英文。完全不懂英语,或者英语非常差的同学可以从阅读理解里面摘抄英语句子。如似懂非懂,可以参考,参照模仿阅读理解的句子,改头换面用到自己的作文里面。作文没有标准答案,意思接近也可以得分的。记住一定要写够单词数。
3、在意思表达都正确的情况下,句子用的词汇越好,结构越好自然可以得高分,但是这个需要我们平时的积累,而我们的同学多数英语基础不好,那我们的战略则是不求句子优美只求句子意思表达正确,所以我们要尽量用最简单常见的句型,可以是小学英语或者初中英语常见的句型,例如:I think/ feel that ……(我认为/ 觉得某事),I glad that ……(我很高兴某事),It’s good / OK/ very important / very lucky that ……(某事好/ 很重要/ 很幸运)。举例的这几个句子大家一定要记着,是万能句子,非常好用,80%以上的情况可以硬套进作文里,哪怕凑数也能得几分。
4、复杂的词汇就不多说,下面给同学们几个连接词作为句子的开头,可以使整篇作文的思路表达清晰,对于英语差的同学就可以硬套进去,也占字数,还可以得几分First/ Second/ Besides/ Finally首先,第二,再次,最后On one hand,on the other hand一方面,另一方面In a word总而言之Although/ But/ However/ At the same time虽然,但是,然而,同时Recently/ Today/ Now最近,如今,现在Lukcily/ Especially幸运地,尤其Generally speaking一般地说
进入正题:英语作文让很多基础不好的同学非常头疼,其实只要掌握规律和技巧,还是不难,因为基本上每年的题目都是写信为主,有固定的格式和固定的语句可以直接套。下面是最近5年的作文真题,同学们可以一起看一下,最后附有英语作文的评分标准。
一、2023年真题
你(Li Yuan)要参加一次英语征文比赛,题目为MyFavorile Photo。请写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
·拍照时间和地点;
·照片中的人物或景物;
·喜欢这张照片的原因。
参考范文:
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to share with you one of my favorite photos that holds aspecial place in my heart.The photo was taken during rbeinip to Paris last summer. It was captured at the iconic Eiffel Tower. just as the sun was setting behind it, creating a breathtaking backdrop. In the photo, I am standing alongside my best friend, both of us beaming with joy ang excitementop.What makes this photo so special to me is the combination of tite srumnng arcnitecture and the precious memories it holds. The Eiffel Tower represents the beauty and romance of Paris, and being able to experience it with my closestfriend madeiteven morememorable.EverytimeI look at this photo. it transports me back to that magical moment. reminding me ofthe incredibleadventures we shared together. Ijust wanted to share this photo and thestory behinditwithyou.Ihope it brings a smile to your face,justasitdoes to mine.Let'splanourownadventuresoonand create more unforgettable memories together!
二、2022年真题
你(Li Yuan)下周一因为要去参加演讲比赛,不能上外教(Prof.Smith)的写作课。请给他写一
封 e-mail,内容包括:
·请假并表示歉意;
·解释不能上课的原因,如比赛的重要性;
·承诺会自学所缺内容并按时交作业;
·祝他愉快。
参考范文:
Dear Prof.Smith,
I have a compete this Monday, so I have to give up your important class to join this compete. l am worrying about how to improve competition,so I decide to find a enough time to improve after this compete.Please understand the reason why I asked for leave.I have prepared for this contest for a long time.
The competition for the speech contest is so fierce that I need to go all out. In the face of this pressure, I have to ask for leave from the teacher and hope that the teacher will approve Ipromise that I will make up the missing course content and submit the homework in time when I come back from the competition.I hope you will approve again.
Your student
Li Yuan
三、2021年真题
学校将组织一次英语演讲比赛,打算邀请外教(John)来做评委。请你(Li Yuan)给他写一封e-mail,内容包括:
·邀请他担任评委(judge);
·告知他比赛安排(如:时间、地点等);
·希望他赛后进行点评;
·期待他能接受邀请。
参考范文:
Dear John,
I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contestwhich will be held in our school on September 21st. As scheduledpreviously, it will start at 2:00 pm at the Lecture Hall of our library, andten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic. You arewelcome to say something about the contests’ wonderful performance.
It is expected that the contest will come to an end at 4:00 pm. Idappreciate it if you could accept our invitation at your convenience. Ifpossible, please contact me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
With best wishes!
Yours,
Li Yuan
四、2020年真题
你(Li Yuan)收到美国朋友 Thomas的e-mail,他提及要来中国留学的想法。请给他回一封e-mail,内容包括:
·欢迎他来中国留学;
·推荐一所学校;
·介绍该学校所在的城市;
·表达为他提供帮助的意愿。
参考范文:
Dear Thomas,
I'm glad to hear from you. l sincerely welcome you to study in China.I want to recommend a university to you.
l recommend Peking University and it's in Beijing. Peking University has many professors with knowledge, and its Chinese department is very good.Beijing is the capital of China and the center of politics, economy and culture.Beijing is also the most developed city in China, with convenient transportation and friendly people.
If you need more help, I'll be happy to help you.Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Yuan
五、2019年真题
新学期伊始,你们班准备组织一场迎新晚会,让同学们熟悉起来。你(Li Yuan)打算邀请外教(Tim)来参加迎新晚会。请给他写一封e-mail,内容包括:
(1)邀请他参加迎新晚会;
(2)介绍迎新晚会的一些活动安排:
(3)希望他能够做个简短发言;
(4)期待他的到来。
参考范文:
Dear Tim,
Hello! I'm Li Yuan from class 8 (1) of Meimei middle school. I'm writing to you mainly to invite you to our class's orientation party. We will hold a welcomeparty on the evening of December 1 in our eighth year (1). Our party agenda mainly includesthree items:
First, each student introduces their main situation, including where they come from, whatinterests and hobbies they have, and draws in the distance and feelings between the students:Second, watch students' talent show. The students in our class prepared some wonderfuprograms, including dance and quyi performance; Third, teachers and students have funtogether. The teacher introduces some requirements and new requlations of the new semesterwhich makes it easier for students to adapt to the life of the new semester. At the same timeteachers and students sing and dance together to work hard and struggle together in the newsemester
The above is the basic process of our class's orientation party. I look forward to you attendingour class's orientation party. At that time, you will make a brief speech at the party to leteveryone have a deeper understanding of you.
Your student Livuan.
六、作文评分标准
1、评分原则:
(1)本题总分为25分,分五档给分。
(2)评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后根据该档次的具体要求给分。
(3)纳入第五档的作文应取得至少两位阅卷教师的认可。
(4)字数不足100或超出120的,酌情扣1~2分。
(5)拼写与标点符号的准确性视其对表达的影响程度予以评分。英、美式拼写均可。
(6)如书写较差,以致影响表达,将分数降低一个档次。
2、评分标准:
第五档 (21~25分) | 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 主题突出;内容充实,层次分明;行文流畅;使用了丰富的语法结构和词汇;基本无语言错误。 |
第四档 (16~20分) | 较好地完成了试题规定的任务。 主题明确;内容完整,层次清楚;文字连贯;语法结构有变化,词汇比较丰富;有少量语言错误。 |
第三档 (11~15分) | 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 主题不明确;内容尚完整,有层次;语句较通顺;虽有不少语言错误,但不影响内容表达 |
第二档 (6~10分) | 未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。 主题不明确;内容不完整,层次不清;缺少连贯性;语句欠通顺;有较多的语言错误,影响了内容 表达。 |
第一档 (1~5分) | 未完成试题规定的任务 明显跑题;内容贫乏,结构层次混乱;语句不通顺;有严重的语言错误。 |
0分 | 所写的内容与试题要求毫不相关,语句混乱,无法理解。 |