文/刘宝彩/天津
针对标题，本文“以节约粮食拯救世界（Saving food, saving the world）”为题写英语作文为例，介绍了英语写作原理：“左找原因←以提示观点为中心→右找结果”，来操作英语写作，并提出用英语逻辑思维写作的参考意见，这对英语写作质量提升的意义巨大。由此大考生写得富有英语思维清晰明白，手握主动权，不会干瞪眼，创新思想足够，写作质量、方法优。
以下英语写作背景提示是：你校英语俱乐部以“节约×××”为题征文，请你以李华名义写一篇英文邮件投稿，谈谈关于生活中浪费时间、食物、资源（任选其一）等问题看法，为此你要说明为什么及如何节约它或你想到的…观点。
可能用到的词语提示：resources（资源）；waste（浪费）；food/dishes（食物）；population（人口）；garbage container（垃圾桶）
Dear Editors from English Club
I thank you for your letter to all students in our school asking them for discussion on the topic about saving one of kinds: time, food and resources.
The above topic is interesting to me, helping find it important for everyone to have food/dishes made available to them. Food enables Chinese society to keep sufficiently stable and develop for security. That results from China’s population reached a little more than 1.4 billion according to statistics authorities of China in 20--.
China as largest-population country in the world needs consuming food so much that, kept alive, people eat and drink to live life normally.
They live on food and dishes that are to serve to them, eaters, who should fulfil morally mutual obligation to follow basic rules and regulations. Thinking about these, food-eating everyone is requested to take as properly much as one eats in need when having meal.
This is considered as being moral, economical and political or legal problem. Combining with this, some of its eaters throw food/dishes down after meal which they regard as being without eating. It means food/dishes were not put in their mouth or bag, to be taken home, but in garbage container immorally. That shows personal and social economy suffers shortages comparatively. This action makes it impossible for the others to take opportunity of enjoy eating in their lives, to which to become harmful politically.
To prevent food-related waste from increasing in resources, I would air my voice on fighting off the right-to-life challenge facing people. Legally, I consider it right of food wasters to be treated like common criminal, as per new law to be made by drawing up food-wasting draft as shall be approved of in past time.
Above-said points prove suitable for China so perfectly that food may remain adequate for supplies in China, needing importing from foreign countries years. This time sees China-achieved solutions to food that helps save necessarily for Chinese people, standing by saving the world where China becomes largest in population.
上述英语作文话题Saving food, saving the world（是节约粮食拯救世界）中文意思：
俱乐部编辑们，
感谢编辑发函邀请所有同学，就谈论关于生活中浪费时间、食物、资源（任选其一）等问题发表看法。
这个话题令我感兴趣，因为有助于我认识每一个人吃到所买到的食物饭菜是非常重要的，这样中国社会处于稳定及国家发展也是安全的。之所以如此是因为中国人口据统计当局20--年公布的数据达到了14亿之多。
中国是世界上人口最多的国家每天需要粮食消耗非常之多，以致于人民都要吃喝才能正常生活。
由此人们靠吃食物饭菜生存，所以应履行在道德上共同的责任来遵守基本的规则，由此告知请每一位吃饭的人适量盛取所需饭菜。
这不仅是道德、经济问题还是政治和法律问题。例如一些食客饭后把食物饭菜倒掉因人为不吃了。就是说饭菜没有完全吃掉或打包带走而是丢进垃圾桶里了，这便是道德问题了。由此个人和社会的经济相对引起匮乏。所以这些人的行为让其他人相对在生活中被剥夺享有吃饭的机会，这便是政治问题了。
为了阻止食物资源浪费的扩大，我提出意见——需要击退对人们生存权的挑战。从法律角度讲，根据起草日前已批准的食物浪费草案的新立法，我认为把食物浪费者们视为像普通犯罪一样是不无错误的。
为此完全适合中国实际情况，如此粮食在中国供应保持充足，因为中国粮食多年还需要从国外进口。这样中国解决粮食问题，帮助为中国人民节省必要的粮食而拯救了世界，由于世界上中国人口是最多的。
上述英语作文可以看出：考生用自己的思想写作出英语作文，便满足了学生考生思想是各不相同的写英语作文的要求——内容和形式完美地结合起来的英语作文会让判卷老师眼睛亮冒金光给学生得高分甚至满分。
总结：
这篇英语作文，显现出考生自己写作英语产生的“范文”大大地符合考题的思想要求，适应了特定的英文写作内容、题材和体裁，便正确地“套住”了大考英语写作要求。由此这篇英语写作内容的含义和观点，用逻辑思维推理，才能让英语写作考生较好地写出具有自己逻辑思维之思想性的“英语范文”了，故此不是他人的范文。当然，看到标题——“高分英语作文怎么写才是大考判阅卷老师眼中的范文”之价值了。
编辑语：
《高分英语作文怎么写才是大考判阅卷老师眼中的范文》，本文阐述写英语作文的五方法：①概括已知条件描写；②事实描写；③措施描写；④过渡句、段；⑤英语逻辑推理写作成文。为此建议高考生写作英语文理论结合实际相配合，并结合实例文让高分质量优秀英语文走向考生。
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