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“不会写英语作文”是网友对本文作者说的，接着看网友自述内容：“现初二，英语成绩感觉还挺好的；就是英语作文不好呀！！！！我每次写英语作文都只写了一两句话或者不写，因为不会写。现想把英语作文补上去，该怎么补？怎么做呢？”
这个初中网友自述的问题不是个别问题，而是普遍问题。为解决这个问题，我们不妨从大考判（阅）卷老师评分标准的角度，来考虑解决问题。所以下功夫研究评分标准究竟都是什么内容。
大考判（阅）卷老师评分标准具体涉及三方面：(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述清楚程度和合理性;(2)词汇和语法结构使用的准确性、适配性和多样性;(3)上下文衔接的流畅性及全文的连贯性。为满足判卷老师规定的三标准要求，本文写作中考英语作文之思路和技能有四点。
具体四点：1说出主题；2主题产生的原因；3主题产生的结果；4达到这种结果应该采取什么措施。这四点阐述清楚了，就OK了。其表达形式是“2原因←1主题→3结果→4措施”。使用“原因句 提示句 结果句”模式，即“因为…所以…”模式写出英语表达——内容、思维、逻辑和语法，“四位一体”，便“有词儿写，有词儿知道怎么写”如上英语作文了。这样有助于大考判（阅）卷老师给考生提档次升分数！
为此以广东广州中考（20--）真题英语作文为例，写作已知条件如下。
“广州某电台英文频道将开设Welcome to Guangzhou栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微广州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需如下五点提示内容。1 位置: 中国南方；2历史: 两千多年；3气候特点；4特色：花城及美食；5一个好去处及理由。注意: 1. 词数: 80词左右 ; 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计总词数”
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. -----------------------------Guangzhou is waiting for you.
正式写英语作文如下
Anyone is will be happy to have a good time, coming to Guangzhou city that is located in the south of China. The city is one of the beautiful ones with a history in a little more than 2,000 years.
Its weather is quite mild in Spring at the time when the wind blows gently and it often rains. It is hot in summer when many people would like to go swimming. The air is cool and dry in autumn when people make lanterns sold in market. They are bought by parents for their children. It is cold but seldom snows in winter.
Guangzhou as one of the cities in China is well-known as flowers that can be seen season by season. This helps visitors enjoy themselves in the place where it is famous as its delicious food like dim sum or snack. This means it is really something so favourable to eat that you can't miss. After you do this (After doing this), you are asked/expected to visit the Canton Tower which is described as the landmark of Guangzhou. That makes you get a bird's-eye view of Guangzhou. It is waiting for you.
从英文写作可以看出三标准的可行性和实操性：
(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述清楚程度和合理性，具体体现：内容要点是通过英语五个句型——1.主语 系动词 主语补足语（表语）；2.主语 谓语（ 状语）；3.主语 谓语 宾语；4.主语 谓语 直宾 间宾；5.主语 谓语 宾语 宾语补足语；6.以上1到5句子的扩展句子——而表述的并达到清楚程度的，其中合理性是通过英语逻辑思维四种思维方法——①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果——表述而达到合理性。
(2)词汇和语法结构使用的准确性、适配性和多样性，具体词汇体现：locate in; in a little more than;blow;具体语法结构体现：make lanterns sold;would like to go swimming;be bought by parents for;be well-known as;flowers that can be seen season by season;This helps visitors enjoy;the place where it is famous as its delicious food;This means;it is really something so favourable to eat that;are asked/expected to visit;Tower which is described as the landmark;That makes you get a bird's-eye view这些达到准确性、适配性和多样性。
(3)上下文衔接的流畅性及全文的连贯性，具体体现：Its weather;at the time when the wind blows;in summer when many people would like;in autumn when people make lanterns sold in market. They are bought;flowers that can be seen season by season;This helps visitors enjoy;the place where it is famous as its delicious food;This means; so favourable to eat that you;After you do this (After doing this), you are asked/expected to visit;Tower which is described as the landmark;That makes you get a bird's-eye view这些能满足了流畅性及全文的连贯性。
总结：
上述英语文使用英语逻辑思维写作英语作文，符合了“英语是逻辑语言，不是模板范文语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂”之要求。所以表达的最基本的形式——以提示观点句为中心，左找原因，右找结果，这样一步一步推理写作英语作文——写出的英语作文就完全符合以英语为母语的人写作英语的标准了。
这样才能凝聚起英语写作内容和逻辑匹配的价值和精彩。使用英语逻辑思维写作英语得高分。期待这些给大考生带来：称心如意得高分！彻底满足判卷老师规定的三方面的标准要求，无疑启发了中考生写作英语作文之思路和技能。解决——英语作文，从不会写到会写且写得很好得高分，需要做些什么——之问题了。所以就“怎么能写好初中英语作文”的具体操作，网友考生如有需求可得到本文作者帮助。
编者语：
“英语作文 从不会写到会写且写得很好得高分 需要做些什么？”文章，叙述了——为解决不会写英语作文的问题，需要研究大考判（阅）卷老师的评分标准。这涉及内容要点的覆盖、词汇和语法结构的使用、上下文衔接的流畅性以及全文的连贯性等方面。为此，要按照“原因句 提示句 结果句”模式写出英语作文，将主题、原因、结果和措施表达清楚。以广东广州icon中考真题为例，作文要求介绍广州的位置、历史、气候特点、特色和一个好去处，并指出这些内容的重要性。
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