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针对标题，本文从阐述四项内容开始：一、英语作文写作已知条件；二、学生写作原文；三、修改作文汇总；四、用英语逻辑思维方法写英语作文。其中从第二项到第四项可以清楚地看到修改英语作文的五方法：①概括已知条件描写；②事实描写；③措施描写；④过渡句、段；⑤英语逻辑推理写作成文，具体如下。
一、写作已知条件如下：
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
66.假定你是李华，你校将以“3月22世界水日”为主题，请你代表学生会写一份倡议书，呼吁同学们节约用水，防止水污染。内容包括：1.现状；2.措施；3.发出倡议。注意：1.词数 80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
Dear students,
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The Students' Union
二、学生写作原文
Today I'm here appealing to you to save water. As heavy industries developed, the water pollution is getting more and more serious. It's harm to us that water which we can use on the earth takes up a very smal percentage of the all.
So what should we do to save it. Firstly we should turn off the tape in time after we use it. Secondly we should not use water too frequently if unnecessary. Thirdly we can make full use of water, for example use water with which clean vegetables to water the flowers.
Eventually let's start small to make a difference to water-saving.
三、英语作文修改成优秀文
Today I'm here appealing to you to save water. By comparison with this, as heavy industries developed, the water pollution is getting more and more serious. That has done a great deal of harm to people physically. This means that, having been polluted partly, water which we can use is in its low percentage on the earth.
So what should we do to save water? In contrast, water is not to use too much if unnecessarily. This is regarded as being successful in making full use of some water with which to wash vegetable, that needs watering flowers.
Eventually let's start saving water to make a positive impact on a positively-mental attitude, which keeps one’s life full of brightness in one’s heart, and becomes vigorous enough in living life excellently, inspiring people to develop physically, to their delight.
四、用英语逻辑思维方法，写英语作文如下
Dear my classmates, friends and fellows,
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I, Li hua, write you a proposal stating that all students are asked to use water reasonably, needing to be conserved, to start from today----”World Water Conservation Day”. （利用已知条件概括描写）
The above helps find it necessary for me absolutely to keep in mind the fact that world-wide water consists of 93% of saltwater, 7% freshwater together with only 0.8% as is consumed by people achieving a different purpose. For example, During its high consumption, the water becomes available for plant’s growth to be in rice and wheat, and industrial products to develop such as steel, textile, paper, and so on. People reply on water to drink for their survial day by day, together with for daily life to live from time to time. （此段阐述现状）
As known to all by this, they would not be at work and in life without water, that brings them to get really ill undoubtedly. （过渡句）Accordingly, you are expected to take measure to re-use water. This indicates that vegetable-washing water is used for watering flower, so is clothes-washing water for flushing toilet.（此段阐述措施）
The above-said points enable me to submit a proposal to all for remaining in the habbit of saving water in its use really vitally so that you together with me may make the life-living environment more comfortable to people by caring about water source they used. （此段阐述发出倡议）
Sincerely yours
Lihua one of students from the Students’ Union
总结：
把学生英语作文原文修改成优秀文，使用英语逻辑思维四方法：“①一因一果；②一因多果；③多因一果；④多因多果,其中形式是：原因句←提示句→结果句。达到了：作文审题不会漏；论据过渡也不丢；观点逻辑跑不走、内容语法呈优秀之目的，所以英语写作文的四种方法要牢记，才能写出优秀英语作文，以事实为据看出——高分梦想成真！高中生写英语文就是用这几种方法修改成优秀英语作文。英语作文要修改，大考生留言我助你提升写作分数。
编辑语：
《高分梦想成真！高中生写英语文怎么用五种方法修改成优秀英语作文》，本文阐述修改英语作文的五方法：①概括已知条件描写；②事实描写；③措施描写；④过渡句、段；⑤英语逻辑推理写作成文。为此建议高考生写作英语文理论结合实际相配合，并结合实例文让高分质量优秀英语文走向考生。
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